"Here is my secret. It is very simple: It is only with the heart that one can see rightly; what is essential is invisible to the eye.."- Antoine de Saint Exupéry

She is still on the bed

She is still on the bed… White and still like the water of the deepest lake in the most peaceful morning…

Light flowing, dripping from behind heavy curtains… cool air caressing her face, entering her nostrils… sunshine touching her shivering eyelids… his hand on her back, his breath on her hair, his strong perfume floating, his voice, his sweet voice lingering in her ear…

She opens her big eyes, tries to sit on the edge of the bed, tries to keep her back straight and sighs, gasping for more life…

She closes her sad eyes… He left only a memory.

(100 words)

21 responses

  1. lovely and great image to accompany, Bravo

    June 16, 2012 at 01:13

  2. what are you trying to do to me?

    June 16, 2012 at 02:13

    • horrid story or good story? 🙂

      June 16, 2012 at 02:19

      • i mean with the pic of the girl on the bed. it’s causing – tension.

        June 16, 2012 at 02:21

      • the pic and the story are one… 🙂
        tension? well, that’s a sign that you are alive… 🙂

        June 16, 2012 at 02:23

      • oh, i know they went together. enjoyed it all. and yes, it’s – i mean – i’m alive.

        June 16, 2012 at 02:25

    • I am happy if it’s / you are alive… that was the idea… 🙂
      Thank you so much Rich.

      June 17, 2012 at 00:07

      • me and – it – thank you too.

        June 17, 2012 at 02:16

  3. beautiful post


    June 16, 2012 at 10:08

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  5. Hopefully she were 🙂

    June 16, 2012 at 23:42

    • Do you remember “She is still on my bed”? This is a different moment of a different life from a different POV… 🙂

      June 16, 2012 at 23:54

      • My post? Yes. And I rather prefer your POV … in this case!

        June 16, 2012 at 23:59

      • Why not your POV? She was still there, with you, beautiful, loving you… yours, even though you were too consumed by the thought that you might lose her…
        My POV? It is indeed closer to the reality of life, of those 3 words about it, that whatever happens, big or small, horrid or beautiful IT GOES ON… with or without us…

        June 17, 2012 at 00:04

  6. nice

    June 19, 2012 at 07:23

  7. t

    Such a sad ending for such a beautiful post. Nicely done!

    June 22, 2012 at 16:34

  8. The more I look, the more I like her. Enough to comment twice 🙂

    June 23, 2012 at 18:07

    • Oh wow!!!! 😆 maybe she will become alive… 😉

      June 23, 2012 at 22:17

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