"Here is my secret. It is very simple: It is only with the heart that one can see rightly; what is essential is invisible to the eye.."- Antoine de Saint Exupéry

Rain

“See, look at them, he’s a friend of mine. She’s beautiful, rich, she supports him, she would make his every fantasy come true. Now that is a true woman.”

As he was pronouncing the words the time stopped for her. Suddenly she was holding the hand of a stranger.

As she took away her hand from his hand it felt like a thousand veils falling from her eyes.

Oh, how she loved him… But he was not the same man anymore. It felt as if the sweet lover she used to know had vanished from the face of Earth.

Struggling to keep the tears behind her eyes and not to burst she stopped and made a first step away from him.

“What’s wrong? Another scene? You and your scenes, I’m sick and tired of your reactions!”

Eyes full of grief she turned away and left him in the middle of the street.

Rain kept falling from the sky as if the sky itself would have mourned for her soul.

She stopped in front of the newspapers booth. On the front page a black and white picture of a smiling woman :

 “You are perfect and you need noone to prove it!”

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200 words

memyselfandela, 2012

20 responses

  1. Queencheckmate

    I have nominated you for the “One Lovely Blog Award”. Congratulations! I nominated you because your blog is special for me and it has something that i don’t find in all other one that I surf. Here is the link:
    http://queencheckmate.wordpress.com/2012/10/30/queencheckmate-was-nominated-for-the-one-lovely-blog-award/

    October 30, 2012 at 20:21

    • Dear Q.,
      Many many thanks for honouring me and thinking of me. I made a promise to myself that I will not accept awards anymore. It’s my way of diminishing my ego, if you want a reason. 🙂
      Many hugs and waves back to you! 😉 🙂

      October 31, 2012 at 18:52

      • Queencheckmate

        Ela, no problem at all, it was a simple way to tell you that i like your blog and who write in it.
        Take care my friend
        Wave and safe path
        Queenie

        November 2, 2012 at 23:18

  2. I have nominated you for the “One Lovely Blog Award’. Congratulations! I nominated you because your blog is SPECIAL for me, with the contents you bring out, and the particular style of your presentation, with depth and insights! Here is the link:
    http://actualfreedomjustine.com
    2012/10/31

    October 31, 2012 at 04:15

    • Thank you so much Justine, you honour me, you are too kind. You honour me by stopping by and reading and sharing thoughts with me. For me awards are not much worth, they only increase the ego, which I am doing my best to diminish. You are a spiritual person and you will understand this better than others.
      Peace and Love to you, Justine! 🙂

      October 31, 2012 at 18:48

      • Appreciated!

        November 1, 2012 at 00:54

  3. I always like walking in the rain, so no one can see me crying…

    November 3, 2012 at 22:27

    • 🙂 “I’ll never let you see
      The way my broken heart is hurting me
      I’ve got my pride and I know how to hide
      All my sorrow and pain
      I’ll do my crying in the rain…”

      November 3, 2012 at 22:30

      • When someone is crying, of course, the noble thing to do is to comfort them. But if someone is trying to hide their tears, it may also be noble to pretend you do not notice them… 🙂

        November 3, 2012 at 22:48

      • Yes, exactly. 🙂

        November 3, 2012 at 22:51

      • Wow! You agreed with me this time… are you kidding me?

        November 3, 2012 at 23:04

      • Hahahaha…. Oh , come on, am I that BAD????
        I am such a word fighter???? 😛
        No, I’m not kidding you, you are MOSTLY right! 😆 😆 😆

        November 3, 2012 at 23:07

      • As everybody is… Hahahaha 🙂 namely, as special as anybody else 🙂 🙂

        November 3, 2012 at 23:18

      • That’s also truth!!! 😀 😀 😀

        November 3, 2012 at 23:20

      • When you agree with me on such a high proportion, I begin to feel that there is something wrong … Hahahaha 🙂

        November 3, 2012 at 23:30

      • Oh no, nothing’s wrong… I assure you. 😀

        November 3, 2012 at 23:34

      • Ok, Ok,
        Are you sure????

        November 3, 2012 at 23:44

      • Yeap, I’m very sure. 😀

        November 3, 2012 at 23:48

      • 🙂

        November 3, 2012 at 23:55

      • 😉

        November 4, 2012 at 00:00

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