"Here is my secret. It is very simple: It is only with the heart that one can see rightly; what is essential is invisible to the eye.."- Antoine de Saint Exupéry

Beyond Reach

20

 

Silence weighs mountains on your soul
As you try to touch me,
To kiss my ghostly light
And my eons of darkness.
Yet I’m beyond your reach
In the dream of a fantasy.
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33 words

memyselfandela, 2013

This is my entry for the Trifecta Challenge.

14 responses

  1. This is brilliantly beautiful.

    February 16, 2013 at 02:08

    • Thank you so much dear Deana 🙂

      February 16, 2013 at 20:56

  2. Excellent, and loved the photo too!

    February 16, 2013 at 13:12

    • Thank you so much dear Sandra. 🙂

      February 16, 2013 at 20:56

  3. Draug419

    So beautiful. I love it.

    February 16, 2013 at 14:31

    • Thank you so much Draug, you honour me.
      I tried many times to comment on your posts, but for some reason I cannot post my comments on your blog… 😦
      You are an awesome writer, congratulations on all the wonderful posts that won the Trifecta challenges and also for all the rest. I am reading you, it’s only comments that I can’t make… yet , maybe I’ll find the reason why I cannot post my comments and fix the problem 🙂

      February 16, 2013 at 20:55

  4. Beautiful 🙂

    February 16, 2013 at 15:11

    • Thank you Joe.

      February 16, 2013 at 20:52

  5. THE DREAM OF A FANTASY!!! IF THAT ISN’T HYPERBOLE, I DON’T KNOW WHAT IS!!
    [please excuse the hyperbole CAPS. just that kinda day]

    February 16, 2013 at 16:41

    • Thank you so much my friend.
      You truly honour me.
      Have a great weekend.
      Ela.

      February 16, 2013 at 16:43

  6. This is so real and eerie. Well done!

    February 16, 2013 at 19:37

  7. This is so mysteriously powerful-touched me deeply-the photo is so ethereal too-great combo,loved this:-)

    February 17, 2013 at 18:25

    • Thank you so much dear friend 🙂

      February 18, 2013 at 21:36

      • :-)a pleasure

        February 21, 2013 at 13:54

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