"Here is my secret. It is very simple: It is only with the heart that one can see rightly; what is essential is invisible to the eye.."- Antoine de Saint Exupéry

New Life


Copyright-Janet Webb


The car stopped on the narrow road, in front of the old house.

He could not believe the shape in which the house ended after those years when he was far away. Now that she was sick he thought of the old family house for a quiet life. He must find a cure, he must find a way to save her, he must…

Oh darling, look at it,  we’ll have to repair,  paint and clean it all… My God, so much work…. she sighed looking at him with love.

No, darling, don’t you worry. I’ll build you a new life.


100 words, memyselfandela 2013,  Friday Fictioneers

7 responses

  1. I like this piece it’s very beautiful

    February 26, 2013 at 04:09

  2. kz

    it’s a nice tale full of love… well done

    February 26, 2013 at 05:47

  3. I can feel the love he has for her. I hope it all works out!


    February 26, 2013 at 13:02

  4. I felt the sense of urgency.

    February 26, 2013 at 21:52

  5. They say Love conquers all 🙂

    February 27, 2013 at 13:13

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