"Here is my secret. It is very simple: It is only with the heart that one can see rightly; what is essential is invisible to the eye.."- Antoine de Saint Exupéry

Sweet

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You take my breath
My sweet love
I cannot live without you
Deep under my skin
Like the darkest tattoo
You’re the ink invading my veins
Filling up my aching heart
Breaking me down
Tearing me apart
Yet lifting me to shiny heaven
Oh how I love you
With the passion of a broken winged cherub
Or the pain of a blinded seraphim
With the craziness of a wild child
With the heat of a blaze
With snow in my hair
With tears in my eyes
My sweet desease
My deep intoxication
I’m all in you and you are mine.

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100 words, memyselfandela, 2013

8 responses

  1. I’ve noticed, most poets on WP are Romanians and they write excellent. Can you explain that?

    April 1, 2013 at 08:40

    • Right… well maybe we are a nation or misunderstood sensitive artists? 🙂
      I was interested in how my poem sounds, how is it?

      April 1, 2013 at 12:46

      • Not just this poem but your recent posts are lively, romantic and I like them all. I felt good taking a stroll.
        You seem to be charged up and bright.
        Are you in love, sister? 🙂

        April 1, 2013 at 12:54

      • 🙂 Question for question: who would splash out their soul like that if they were not madly in love?

        April 1, 2013 at 12:58

      • Let me share a fun poem to respond to your question for question.
        Heads rolled in the bar
        torn pieces of my pictures
        on the streets
        did the rounds
        Seems my lover is no more madly in love

        April 1, 2013 at 13:03

      • Well there are many stories and versions, yet each soul knows his own… 🙂

        April 1, 2013 at 13:06

  2. I like that 😀

    April 1, 2013 at 09:51

    • Thank you. 🙂

      April 1, 2013 at 12:44

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